Lesshomework

　　WhetherstudentsshouldhaveLesshomework
　　Nowadays，thetopicofWhetherstudentsshouldhaveLesshomeworkisaheateddebate。SomebodywillsaysthatstudentsshouldhaveLesshomeworkasitcandecreasestudentsstresswhereassomebodysaysthatstudentsshouldhavemorehomeworksinceitcandeepenstudentssthatstudentsstudymemory。Inmyopinion，studentsshouldhaveLesshomeworkbecausestudentswillfeelpleasantsincetheycandomorethingsthattheylike。Now，IwillfromtwoaspectsasreducestudentsburdenandstudentswillmoreenjoyextracurriculareventsdetailstudentsshouldhaveLesshomework。Afterconsideringtheamountofextracurricularactivitiesthatstudentscanenjoyandtheamountofstressstudentscanbear，IaminfavorofgivingstudentsLesshomework。
　　First，asforreducingstudentsburden，givingstudentsLesshomeworkcanreducetheirstress。Nowadays，studentsshoulddomoreandmorehomeworkandsitfortheexams。Atthesametime，theyshouldpreparefortheirtest，sotheywillhavealotofstress。Wefrequentlycanhearthatthestudentsjumpoffthebuildingastheygetabadresultintest，orhavementaldiseasesontheTV。Forexample，accordingtothenewsthatIwatched，astudentsjumpedoffthebuildingsincehecouldnotinthecollegeaswellworryingitwilllettheirparentsfeelsad。Fromtheaboveexample，itcanbeconcludedthatstudentsaresufferingfromstressandthusthereisnopointgivingstudentsmoreandmorehomeworksothatstudentswillfeelrelaxed。
　　Second，asforstudentswillmoreenjoyextracurricularevents。IfstudentshaveLesshomework，theywillenjoytheirextracurriculareventsmore。Itisbecausetheywillnotworrythattheycannotfinishthehomework。Moreover，byjoiningtheevents，studentsalsocanreducethestressastheycandothingsthattheylike。Forinstance，sinceIhavemorehomeworkthatIshoulddo，IdidnotjoinanyextracurriculareventswhenIwasinF。4。But，whenIwasjuniorform，Ijoinedmoreandmoreevents，suchasbasketballteamandjudo。Ifeltverygladatthattime，andsinceIworkedout，Iwashealthy。So，ifstudentshaveLesshomework，theycandotheirfavoritethings，andthentheywillfeelcheerfulandmaintaingoodhealth。
　　Manymayholdadifferentviewthatstudentscanconsolidatewhattheyhavelearntinthelessonsbydoingmorehomeworkandthustheirfinalresultswillbeimproved。Asaresult，betteracademicresultsarebeneficialfortheirfuture。However，Idohavereservationsabouttheabovecomments。Isntittoonarrowmindedtonurturestudentswhoonlyperformwellacademically？Thegovernmentalwaysadvocatetheideaofnurturingallroundedstudentswhoshouldnotonlyexcelacademicallybutalsoinextracurricularareasaswell。Idohavesomereservationsabouttheaboveopinion。Ithinkifstudentswanttodeepenthememorythatisnotonlyoneway，perhapstheycanbuysomeexercisestodowhentheyarefree。
　　Toconclude，IthinkstudentsshouldhaveLesshomeworkthattheycanreducetheirburden，andjoinmoreevents。
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　　WhetherstudentsshouldhaveLesshomework
　　Nowadays，thetopicofWhetherstudentsshouldhaveLesshomeworkisaheateddebate。SomebodysaysthatstudentsshouldhaveLstresswhereassomebodysaysthatstudentsshouldhavemorehomeworksinceitcanconsolidatestudentsstudy。Inmyopinion，studentsshouldhaveLesshomeworkbecausestudentswillfeelpleasantsincetheycandomorethingsthattheylike。
　　First，asforreducingstudentsburden，givingstudentsLesshomeworkcanreducetheirstress。Nowadays，studentsshoulddomoreandmorehomeworkandpreparefortheexams，sotheywillhavealotofstress。Wefrequentlycanhearthenewsthatthestudentsjumpedoffthebuildingastheygotabadresultintest，orhadmentaldiseasesontheTV。Forexample，accordingtothenewsthatIwatched，astudentsjumpedoffthebuildingsincehecouldnotenteracollegeas，worryingitwouldllettheirparentsfeelsad。Fromtheaboveexample，itcanbeconcludedthatstudentsaresufferingfromstressandthusthereisnopointgivingstudentsmoreandmorehomeworksothatstudentscanfeelrelaxed。
　　Second，ifstudentshaveLesshomework，theywillhavemoretimetoenjoytheirextracurricularactivities。Theywillnotworrythattheyhavenotimetofinishtheirhomework。Moreover，byjoiningindifferentactivities，studentsalsocanreducethestressastheycandothingsthattheylike。Forinstance，sinceIhadmuchhomework，IdidnotjoininanyextracurricularactivitieswhenIwasinG4。But，whenIwasinjuniorschool，Itookpartinmoreandmoreactivities，suchasbasketballandjudo。Ifeltverygladatthattime，andIwashealthytoo。So，ifstudentshaveLesshomework，theycandotheirfavoritethings，andthentheywillfeelcheerfulandmaintaingoodhealth。
　　Manymayholdadifferentviewthatstudentscanconsolidatewhattheyhavelearntfromthelessonsbydoingmorehomeworkandthustheirfinalresultswillbeimproved。Asaresult，betteracademicresultsarebeneficialfortheirfuture。However，Idohavereservationsabouttheabovecomments。Isntittoonarrowmindedtonurturestudentswhoonlyperformwellacademically？Thegovernmentalwaysadvocatetheideaofnurturingallroundedstudentswhoshouldnotonlyexcelacademicallybutalsoinextracurricularareasaswell。Ithinkifstudentswanttodeepenthememory，thereisnotonlyoneway。Perhapstheycanbuysomeexercisestodowhentheyarefree。
　　Toconclude，IthinkstudentsshouldhaveLesshomeworkthattheycanreducetheirburden，andhavemorefun。
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